I can’t believe how rigorous the structural editing process is proving to be. And yet – how rewarding! It’s as if I’m blowing up an inflatable. Instead of a mass of stuff, I now can see how it holds together. It has form. Not there yet… Every edit requires another review because just changing on what day an event happens can have impact on how the storyline flows. But I’m getting there…

It has a title too. The heroine can’t cope. Her mother didn’t return one day after a swim. This novel is about drowning.

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